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人在做天在看!你來寫我評判!【第二期】
ENTRY #73
Author: 路易
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
人在做天在看!你來寫我評判!【第二期】
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
ENTRY #73
［廚師］夜話霓虹亮起時
Author: 路易
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
1 Min Read
124 Words
No Plagiarism!nmgFjfcJVCRaKijDLqCiposted on PＥNAＮＡ 118Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqrsYguuJBd

連結：https://www.penana.com/story/209835/%E5%A4%9C%E8%A9%B1%E9%9C%93%E8%99%B9%E4%BA%AE%E8%B5%B7%E6%99%82

簡介:兩個幫派間的恩怨，宿敵交鋒，新舊傳承

（其實只是作者在看了一點港漫後的腦洞，沒想到竟越寫越多）

範圍：目前17章，想看到哪就看到哪，不拘

問題：有沒有什麼建議，作為一位新手作家要學的還有很多！

小希望：不要太過嚴厲的批評（拜託了118Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvcizdAayw1

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