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【曇花一現】閱讀創挑 & 各位最討厭的玩意
ENTRY #14
Author: 凜羽
Published:
Dec 27, 2025
【曇花一現】閱讀創挑 & 各位最討厭的玩意
Published:
Dec 27, 2025
ENTRY #14
【輓歌的追影】自殺前的一次旅遊
Author: 凜羽
Published:
Dec 27, 2025
1 Min Read
103 Words
No Plagiarism!vzbtrvg5Q5eW2VjlQ84Aposted on PＥNAＮＡ

故事連結：傳送門99Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpVsdThnNM8

這部作品是我第一部作品，當中有不少細節處理得不成熟，也曾經收到回饋說劇情沒有「衝突」這個元素，所以我打算要找個時間大範圍修稿，嘗試加入「衝突」元素，煩請菜根大大幫忙分析一下，看看有哪些地方可以修飾得更好，請多多指教~~

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