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｜無情對｜
ENTRY #15
Author: 虛冲
Published:
Dec 19, 2025
｜無情對｜
Published:
Dec 19, 2025
ENTRY #15
高巖下赤日
Author: 虛冲
Published:
Dec 19, 2025
1 Min Read
188 Words
No Plagiarism!ZM8kMFULPfOzkCE6QTZ8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

上聯：高巖下赤日

下聯：低谷中青年195Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkw7Qk1yZys

詩詞引用：北宋．蘇軾《開先漱玉亭》。原詩列於下方。

對字解析：高對低；巖對谷；下對中；赤對青；日對年，同是計曆單位。有想過「中」字要否用另一個字代替以避免下三平，但是蘇軾原詩也用「來悲風」三個平聲字為這句作結，所以不才就照用「中」字。195Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbFOtDjPbdO

高巖下赤日，深谷來悲風。

擘開青玉峽，飛出兩白龍。

亂沫散霜雪，古潭搖清空。

余流滑無聲，快瀉雙石谼。

我來不忍去，月出飛橋東。

蕩蕩白銀闕，沉沉水精宮。

願隨琴高生，腳踏赤鯇公。

手持白芙蕖，跳下清泠中。195Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmqIXJR890Q

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