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書評活動？！作者你不是每次書評都被噴爆！給我先確定欸～
ENTRY #17
Author: CENPOR
Published:
Dec 21, 2025
書評活動？！作者你不是每次書評都被噴爆！給我先確定欸～
Published:
Dec 21, 2025
ENTRY #17
【求书評】《茫荡行》
Author: CENPOR
Published:
Dec 21, 2025
1 Min Read
144 Words
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感谢大大能举办这次书评创挑(*^▽^*)

传送门：https://www.penana.com/story/180964/%E8%8C%AB%E8%8D%A1%E8%A1%8C/

1）希望评论的方向：想知道故事里的世界观以及剧情风格是否有说服力？

2）简介：那场席卷各地的工业大战刚刚止息，硝烟未散，各国政局摇摇欲坠。新政权四起，旧有的秩序分崩离析，而在权力的裂缝中，地下江湖也悄然苏醒。

3）吐槽自己的作品：剧情感觉有点散，读者会感觉混乱。

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