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古詩詞改新詩
桂魄
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嗯....就像字面上的意思，將古詩詞(詩  詞  曲不限)改成新詩(要讓人看的出原作的影子哦)，以下丟出在下的作品拋磚引玉一下(順便說明格式)


秋思   (改自 馬致遠  天淨沙 秋思)

夕陽西下

小橋  流水 人家

何處是家鄉

在那古道漫漫  踽踽遠去

呱呱躁啼  那寒鴉

西風颯颯  身騎瘦馬

斷腸人在何方

枯藤攀上了老樹

遙指天涯

(格式大概就是:作品名  原作及原作者  內容)

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春蟄
桂魄
三羽
夢飛
春蟄
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斟墨客 。 迷
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