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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第四期
ENTRY #12
Author: 幽零
Published:
Nov 17, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第四期
Published:
Nov 17, 2025
ENTRY #12
《錯位：離間》
Author: 幽零
Published:
Nov 17, 2025
1 Min Read
130 Words
No Plagiarism!nA3EiElC1PszgtYJ4RyHposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.類別

耽美向無限流+微驚悚(?)

2.希望評論章節

正文章節1～7章

（#2～8的位置）

18925字

（卡在接近邊緣的位置，大大可能要辛苦一點w）

3.希望評論的方向

想知道讀者視角的感受

以及讀起來會不會步調過快、太緊湊，或者讓讀者看得很累等等

傳送門：https://www.penana.com/story/154382/%E6%99%82%E5%85%89%E5%AF%86%E5%AE%A4

有問題的話要麻煩再call我了www

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