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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第四期
ENTRY #4
Author: 語者
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第四期
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
ENTRY #4
語場術士
Author: 語者
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
1 Min Read
239 Words
No Plagiarism!efAXsIoZYGMqbHVHzWN3posted on PＥNAＮＡ

謝謝嵐姐開設評文創挑，上次我錯過了，這次趕上了！

有大改文，所以全部都想要嵐姐再幫看一次。

  1. 類別：科幻
  2. 希望評論章節：章節#1、#6~#26221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5oWva3QRBh
    Total: 64105 words221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyO9cRVYHBo
     (1281+3555+3044+2331+3366+2857+4161+2025+2442+1943+1933+2951+2655+2763+3359+593+4079+5297+3183+2875+3423+3989)
  3. 希望評論的方向：

    不用花費時間在錯字、錯句、符號上，未來可能會再一次重新檢查修改，希望主要聚焦在劇情發展

    (a)劇情發展會不會太好猜或者太跳躍221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrBmTMTdhJg
    (b)人物所塑造是否有前後不一221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl2pLrBb9SU
    (c)劇情邏輯上來說會不會邏輯太差（bug不要太明顯其實我就沒差了）需不需要更多的戰鬥或物理、心理解釋？221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡblDAwTd7jo
    (d)整體來說高潮點哪段做得好，哪段做得差？221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk1jll76jBA
    (e)伏筆量會不會太多或太少?221Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4TveFJlmau
    (f)哪幾個章節最精采/無意義

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