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創作者自我督促週會Week87
ENTRY #7
Author: 灰氣球（氣子）
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
創作者自我督促週會Week87
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
ENTRY #7
卡高潮怎麼寫都覺得不滿意
Author: 灰氣球（氣子）
Published:
Nov 16, 2025
1 Min Read
130 Words
No Plagiarism!UdK7y67LzBYRPPc1VjxJposted on PＥNAＮＡ

《灰路》一路走來存稿已經到第十二章的進度了，但是第十二章作為前期的高潮，怎麼寫都不滿意。

寫完不斷反思，這樣有超越第八章堤口嗎，黑狼第一次覺醒那股餘味，有超越第六章沿之視嗎，寫的最迷幻，最詩性的一章。

第十二章除了故事性的全收，在哲學性上有做到升華嗎，節奏呢？

不斷改了又刪，改了又刪，到現在還在卡。

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