【驚蟄】一162Please respect copyright.PENANABZZ4RY77u4
感覺阿澈就直接暈姚霜玥暈的不要不要的,很有學生時期的帶入感。162Please respect copyright.PENANANSQrv5Pa46
對姚霜玥的細節描寫也很棒,愈看愈舒服、淺淺的酒窩,天然呆的天才型學生XD,很有味道又不籠統。162Please respect copyright.PENANAEuYKzVLsWE
反倒是你——阿澈,你對小優沒感覺嗎?是優秀的劇情鉤子。162Please respect copyright.PENANAr3aR60WvrU
162Please respect copyright.PENANAws9WUxiAHq
【驚蟄】二162Please respect copyright.PENANA28fSvMyWKJ
「從頭到尾被她牽著鼻子走的人,好像一直是我。」說明阿澈很清楚自己在這段關係,已不知不覺處於被動且受制於人。162Please respect copyright.PENANA9wgYR528bt
可惜不是兩人單獨出門,期待後續的發展。162Please respect copyright.PENANAAiiM5aKJpm
162Please respect copyright.PENANAt6FBFFuzrW
【春分】一162Please respect copyright.PENANALxuHKZjvkJ
河粉店的描寫很生活化!阿澈又是整個暈船狀態。162Please respect copyright.PENANAYxSel5hrtD
無論是小優的「試衣服」,還是霜玥的「不想將就,但也不想永遠守候。」162Please respect copyright.PENANA2Db5He71TX
整段劇情完美的表達了大家各自對愛情的價值觀。162Please respect copyright.PENANAH4blTWREMB
感覺在這樣逼男主下去他會腦衝嚇到霜玥,期待後續發展。162Please respect copyright.PENANA2ig6CSwxba
162Please respect copyright.PENANAvVuAT2r1IU
【春分】二162Please respect copyright.PENANAGgc3sA4A4d
深入地探討了暗戀者的心理防線,開頭那句因為我害怕就感覺涼涼了,哈哈。162Please respect copyright.PENANAGccfvu9f8E
我一個男生看的很害羞,天啊根本就是以前的我。162Please respect copyright.PENANAFw2NaOGWDh
162Please respect copyright.PENANAj6jBWGj175
【榖雨】162Please respect copyright.PENANAz0fQKyUfh8
在這個季節,我只想把這一片片紅葉收進書裡,夾在某一頁,只為留住這一剎那的溫度。 超喜歡的,筆記筆記。162Please respect copyright.PENANAHEJK6lvloI
阿澈又開始胡思亂想了,看得我好糾結。162Please respect copyright.PENANARoB3wDOHNc
小吐槽:現實世界這樣的行為有點變態變態的XD。162Please respect copyright.PENANAHzeIzXDByw
162Please respect copyright.PENANApe3GvKugeq
【小滿】162Please respect copyright.PENANAbVoXsAtIsN
能當換裝娃娃代表男主顏質還是在線的。162Please respect copyright.PENANAHiPdqPeyOJ
兩人是互相喜歡的感覺?162Please respect copyright.PENANAOSWkJrYjjZ
希望阿澈大方點啊。162Please respect copyright.PENANA1hvCCjOLBW
162Please respect copyright.PENANATaK438N43M
後續一口氣一直看了。162Please respect copyright.PENANAIjFKKZepi5
能確定兩人都對彼此有好感,男主條件也太好了,模特又學霸的。162Please respect copyright.PENANAyXAmLG3r12
「姚霜玥,我喜歡妳。妳可以等我回來嗎?」162Please respect copyright.PENANAUeFqTMg7qw
對我來說這句話有點自私了,不過年輕人嘛XD,還好沒說出口。162Please respect copyright.PENANA8UL1JUbEm9
沒說是好的,恩恩。162Please respect copyright.PENANAwpK4nu0kar
162Please respect copyright.PENANA7zfJQ5SlDY
「柏洋嗎?他人不錯啊,長得也帥。」162Please respect copyright.PENANALIr6NV1Gld
女主角蠻厲害的阿,一直給男主機會呢,男主居然吃醋了。162Please respect copyright.PENANAoIsQa7XJRY
162Please respect copyright.PENANAgMBE5jnjt8
【秋分】162Please respect copyright.PENANAPwujNJfn2L
我真是個爛人。162Please respect copyright.PENANA4ANr3deFrE
我真的總是記不住她的喜好。真是個糟糕的男友。162Please respect copyright.PENANArrsFUvO3xv
確實頗爛。看到這章對男主有點火,期待後續。162Please respect copyright.PENANAkiXO6VWnqD
162Please respect copyright.PENANAkgHYuU6uAi
【寒露】162Please respect copyright.PENANAKCpmla28BR
姚霜玥。162Please respect copyright.PENANA3kur7yyG1L
妳到底要讓我喜歡妳到甚麼程度?162Please respect copyright.PENANAVWduREFBdB
不行了,眼睛要瞎了。162Please respect copyright.PENANAjVgZXSEFrb
別再問了花直接給了,好急。162Please respect copyright.PENANAJk56OtxEWZ
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因為阿澈是我最好的朋友呀? 看吧好人卡來囉。162Please respect copyright.PENANAucG7WWrz1X
感覺兩人的愛情觀有點扭曲了?或是說越走越遠。162Please respect copyright.PENANAiZ8Ky1Y8ez
162Please respect copyright.PENANA7ys02GlFCj
然後我是完全沒想到女主角過世了…162Please respect copyright.PENANATPDuJRtuJh
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《雙生》162Please respect copyright.PENANAfTk6Vs3tFn
換視角了,繼續看,原來小優家庭是這樣。162Please respect copyright.PENANAnQiwPP2nqA
感覺每個人都不約而同地只交往兩個月,哈。162Please respect copyright.PENANAkuKY9vbp0u
直接看到結尾了,我個人反而更喜歡小優,很勇敢的個性,不是單純愛情,162Please respect copyright.PENANAyZjABncnlj
而是另一種堅強。162Please respect copyright.PENANAZM3HxsvLDd
我一邊看一邊打心得的,有點亂XD。162Please respect copyright.PENANA0LgO53pRXH
我的作品跟你的作品風格差太多了,不用硬著頭皮看我的。162Please respect copyright.PENANAMltFgoojo1
期待後續發展。


