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免費批評的修仙文(代替朋友發布)
後集先生
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這是一個可以讓你免費批評的修仙文，而我接受免費批評的原因，是因為我想讓我的能力更進一步



作者(水門鴻文)：我文筆不好、節奏有點快。希望可以提點一下怎麼做？剩下有甚麼不好的地方，也請說出來。謝謝~

帳號運作者(即後集先生)：我曾參與正文的校稿編輯，過程便有不少意見，不過小說領域終究不及友人。或許各位觀眾更加了解小說創作，期許能對正文加以指點他。

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