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講港
ISSUE #2
Author: 莘蓮Sherlyn
講港
Author: 莘蓮Sherlyn
ISSUE #2
旋渦
No Plagiarism!flboNifly2pDIz9EfjfNposted on PＥNAＮＡ

嘩啦

紛沓的水花

人兒一尾一尾

劃出一道道

直線

藍色的漪淪散開 激蕩

 

五彩斑斕的頭顱

一沉一浮

衝刺 超越 緊咬不放76Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd0ilwch8a9
後來居上

大口一張一閉

四肢一划一合

心臟搏動的聲音

從未停歇

 

觸壁 轉身 蹬腿76Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjbZdFmwpwG
張臂

一回又一回

紅色的頭顱遙遙領先

看台上 觀眾笑了

他們看不見

看不見落在末端那一抹藍

 

疲憊積

             壓

倦怠凝 聚

漸漸的 吞噬了

趾尖 腳踝 小腿76Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDlV6zHTiLR
膝蓋

健壯的手臂無力舉起

後腿抽動 落入水底的冰冷

 

看不見

他們都看不見

水底下的呼救

被激蕩的水面壓抑

化為白色的沫

一串串 往上飄

藍色的頭顱

一點點 往下沉

只留下一小片旋渦

被一旁翻湧的浪花

遮蔽

 

咚！

旋渦激起

被拽到岸上的人兒濕搭搭

水珠在胸膛流淌 慢慢地

人們在驚呼

可紛亂的尖叫

無法重啟

他死寂的胸腔

 

白花花的布

將他掩埋

他變成了

新聞播報的數字

一串冷冰冰

 

無數眼睛看見了

可數字只激起

腦內的一絲水花

又一片平靜

與淡忘

 

誰能看見

白布下的吶喊？

但願我能置身大海

與波浪遨遊

但願我能破開池壁

與自由相逢

但願我能找到孤島

與寧靜共存

遠離窒息 遠離聚光 遠離疲憊

但願……小小的旋渦終將被看見

但願……

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Last updated: Oct 24, 2025
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