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【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
ENTRY #40
Author: 幽零
Published:
Oct 7, 2025
【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
Published:
Oct 7, 2025
ENTRY #40
《時光密室》2.0 - 鐵血+詩音
Author: 幽零
Published:
Oct 7, 2025
1 Min Read
98 Words
No Plagiarism!7UuAvWdusR2i5MAMJTimposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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https://www.penana.com/story/154382/%E6%99%82%E5%85%89%E5%AF%86%E5%AE%A4

147Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXBJ9OVojpp

重修之後的我又回來啦~

這次一樣指定鐵血總編輯

不過當然也不能錯過新編輯呢w

方向一樣是書評向，希望著重劇情bug和人物描寫bug（尤其是情緒變化的部分）

請指教，三秒膠2.0已就緒（？？？）

216.73.216.253

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