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【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
ENTRY #23
Author: Omega-3(秋雁)
Published:
Sep 28, 2025
【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
Published:
Sep 28, 2025
ENTRY #23
《寂寞之海》 鐵血編+詩音編
Author: Omega-3(秋雁)
Published:
Sep 28, 2025
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!fw1RRsRiPbkSunfWidwpposted on PＥNAＮＡ

傳送門：《寂寞之海》

第一次參加這類型的活動，我想知道作品的缺點，希望鐵血編從劇情吸引力下手。另外，我也挺好奇自己的文風是甚麼，希望是書評向的回饋，謝謝~184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOIv1i1oIkk

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