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【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
ENTRY #43
Author: 好好吃飯
Published:
Oct 9, 2025
【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
Published:
Oct 9, 2025
ENTRY #43
九尾白狐後悔穿越了 - 奈奈編+詩音編
Author: 好好吃飯
Published:
Oct 9, 2025
1 Min Read
93 Words
No Plagiarism!wzoOQhB0jNkqsS28UQCJposted on PＥNAＮＡ

https://www.penana.com/story/128566/%E4%B9%9D%E5%B0%BE%E7%99%BD%E7%8B%90%E5%BE%8C%E6%82%94%E7%A9%BF%E8%B6%8A%E4%BA%86/

第一次寫小說，進度停滯不前，不知應否繼續寫下去。

想請奈奈編評劇情吸引力和人物刻劃。

再請詩音編評文字風格和敍事技巧。

方向是書評向。

謝謝!

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