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AI劇情官健檢活動(書評或心得)
ENTRY #10
Author: 柏舟
Published:
Sep 13, 2025
AI劇情官健檢活動(書評或心得)
Published:
Sep 13, 2025
ENTRY #10
《舊燕落》
Author: 柏舟
Published:
Sep 13, 2025
1 Min Read
123 Words
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https://www.penana.com/story/190077/舊燕落

老師好，就是我寫著寫著發現邏輯好像不太對，本來是想寫歷史題材的，然而，歷史題材可發揮的空間非常少，所以將寫歷史的稿改了一些，銜接到書中。然後寫著寫著就發現好像有點問題，但是卻說不出問題在哪裡。

如果可以的話所以想請［值星編 (Editor-on-Duty) - 實戰型總編］點評一下，謝謝。

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