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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第三期
ENTRY #29
Author: 車理小龜
Published:
Aug 29, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第三期
Published:
Aug 29, 2025
ENTRY #29
逃不出的迴圈，進不去的世界
Author: 車理小龜
Published:
Aug 29, 2025
1 Min Read
203 Words
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1，標題  逃不出的迴圈，進不去的世界

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2，類別 戰爭

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3，希望評論章節 43章-49章，一章大約2000字，合計一萬五字~1萬7字左右

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4，評論方向，故事結構，戰鬥的進行如何，一開始我以為我能行，結果唯一比較滿意的就只有第44章

還有小A的描寫如何，另比較想知道有沒有甚麼問題

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5，前情提要，在得到兩支連隊的增援後，戰團得以抽出人手進行新一輪行動，而兩位主角跟隨著隊伍為了奪回這星球上最為強大的武器的操作系統而前往地核之中.......

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6，連結，逃不出的迴圈，進不去的世界 - 第48章:空洞王座(下) | Penana

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