在社群網站追蹤的某個作家專頁上看到的，看第一段紅色區塊，再看最下面綠色那一句，深有感觸。
我們寫文章要寫得像一段音樂一樣，要有高低起伏，要有波折層次。
其實本樂看到這張圖的第一眼還在想，怎麼可能會有人這樣寫？後來想到，好像在某些解說影片會看到像第一段紅色區塊的句子，雖然有些會刻意押韻，但還是少了點美感。
不過還是不要拿文章跟影片字幕比咯😗😗😗
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茶水間日記創挑第二期
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Dec 5, 2025
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【12/5 Day 96】創作日記
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