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《異獸來襲》創作過程紀錄
ISSUE #6
Author: 餅貓
《異獸來襲》創作過程紀錄
Author: 餅貓
ISSUE #6
切換視角 失敗篇
No Plagiarism!UlSI4hrjIBrqdijvWpaXposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1-5、2-1我有在章節進行中切換主觀視角。

當時覺得很新鮮，現在再看到這個兩篇，

我其實蠻想破口大罵：「白癡決定！」

事後再看故事，中途切換視角很影響閱讀體驗，這是個爛決定。

我還記得當時為什麼要切換視角，當時的我認為只有主角的有限視角「沒辦法補充其他陣營的背景與動機」。

沒有預告的發生突擊事件，應該會很怪吧！

因此我就補充了其他視角的觀察與行動描述。

我覺得應該有更好的方式，也根本不用特別交代他們偷偷監視的背景，也不需要子敬有仇的私下碎念。

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《異獸來襲》創作過程紀錄
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Last updated: Nov 12, 2025
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