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創作挑戰
ENTRY #3
Author: 子日青
Published:
Aug 19, 2025
創作挑戰
Published:
Aug 19, 2025
ENTRY #3
《踏實之獸》
Author: 子日青
Published:
Aug 19, 2025
1 Min Read
438 Words
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牧言生來浮躁，  

語急如箭，心動如風。  

他走路從不看地，  

只看遠方——  

彷彿塵土與蹄印皆與他無關。

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而誠石，  

那頭老牛，  

四足踏實，步步如誓。  

牠不言語，不回望，  

只在晨光中緩緩前行，  

如同一段未說完的古諺。

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「人之足，輕而躁；  

牛之蹄，重而靜。」  

老者曾如此說。

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牧言不信。  

他說：  

兩腳是自由，是速度，是選擇；  

四足是遲鈍，是束縛，是沉默的懦弱。

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直到第七日，  

誠石停在溪邊，望著水面。  

牧言也低頭看去——  

水中映出一雙牛眼，  

不屬於誠石，  

而屬於他自己。

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那一刻，  

他忽然覺得，  

自己走得太快了，  

快到忘了自己是誰。

他走得太快，快到忘了塵土的聲音； 牛走得太慢，慢到每一步都像誓言。

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人之足，輕而躁；牛之蹄，重而靜。

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他以為自由是速度，選擇是語言； 卻在水中，看見自己的眼，已非人形。

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那是牛的眼——沉默、踏實、不妄語。 而他，已說了太多，走得太遠。

那眼中像在斥責他的急躁， 又像是在教導他踏實的道理。

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他忽然想起老者的話： 牛者，四蹄踏實，不妄語，乃誠實之象徵； 人者，雙足輕盈，心易動搖，常難守初心。

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他低頭不語， 卻彷彿聽見自己心中的喧囂， 被那雙沉默的眼，一一拆解。

牛不語，卻教人沉默；  

人多言，卻忘了初心。  

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四蹄踏實，是誓言；  

雙足輕盈，是逃避。  

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眼中無怒，卻斥責；  

眼中無語，卻教導。  

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誠實非言語，  

而是步步不偏。  

初心非記憶，  

而是動搖中不忘。

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