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墨評留香
ENTRY #6
Author: 商澐
Published:
Jul 16, 2025
墨評留香
Published:
Jul 16, 2025
ENTRY #6
《海棠青塚》
Author: 商澐
Published:
Jul 16, 2025
1 Min Read
126 Words
No Plagiarism!X2Xt61GJSbi6YJ0Iv5tiposted on PＥNAＮＡ

連結：https://www.penana.com/story/173993/海棠青塚

作品字數：113.9K（在改文所以實際應該更少）

是否開放他人留言建議修改：是

字數太多者希望被評論的章節範圍：對哪一段有興趣都可以，感謝來看我的作品

有無特別想聽評論的地方：是否拖沓、是否吸引人、角色塑造成不成功、有沒有記憶點、角色會不會多到記不起來

謝謝舉辦創挑！

216.73.216.86

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