這部是小恆星tung.eva寫的——《夢中的熱氣球樂園》！1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ2E6J23rOp 尼

優點：題材新穎1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡaaYWP0uWEc 尼

          人物設定吸引人1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡKwRDmCzeHF 尼

          故事情節描寫詳細（是那種可以把讀者帶到故事裡！）1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡlqobj0Akho 尼

缺點：男主角分不清楚是誰，故事裡出現了3個男主，但是八星分不清楚誰是男主、誰是男二，真的好痛苦😖1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡTkh2zwIlGi 尼

354Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLiGSAroZT5
1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡUiCLPTAxQF 尼

故事連結：https://www.penana.com/story/149548/%E5%A4%A2%E4%B8%AD%E7%9A%84%E7%86%B1%E6%B0%A3%E7%90%83%E6%A8%82%E5%9C%92/1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6kSgViKGXR 尼

354Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzIarGChb1j
1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡR96844DBYE 尼

354Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiPU6aKESKP
1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3kCVgfLjar 尼

354Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa4cR0l7zOW
1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡcVCpeyQqkF 尼

354Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKDUMXqmJ6L
1234 copyright protection350ＰＥＮＡＮＡH4X0H3eUcx 尼

216.73.217.145