寫作菜鳥日記 -12615Please respect copyright.PENANAff3OD3fPOF
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。15Please respect copyright.PENANAogCbowBDGm
字數 8,28715Please respect copyright.PENANAppE5g6ic9u
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,15Please respect copyright.PENANAXrkvlwrheO
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。15Please respect copyright.PENANAO8QYCDwwvx
跟流水帳差不多(汗)15Please respect copyright.PENANAUswzDfxv0d
卻沒有可以修改的方向。15Please respect copyright.PENANAhgp6zFTWgO
問題應該出在節奏的安排,15Please respect copyright.PENANA7JxKpPk1zP
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,15Please respect copyright.PENANAziBJxy8ycn
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,15Please respect copyright.PENANA0fjc2DmFWQ
到章末堆到最高點。15Please respect copyright.PENANAUWFgENLUxR
但是這一章一直平平的,15Please respect copyright.PENANAaxErYFs1Ev
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點15Please respect copyright.PENANA1YUXJTzRUn
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。15Please respect copyright.PENANAjT3xV8qsSR
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,15Please respect copyright.PENANA9siPqJaMsq
接著寫下一章。15Please respect copyright.PENANAyLU8mIYdU3
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡15Please respect copyright.PENANAI0X0DCsfih
沒什麼思考能力。15Please respect copyright.PENANAg1z664YUGQ
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。15Please respect copyright.PENANA9XBfZnDWQz
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。