寫作菜鳥日記 -12645Please respect copyright.PENANAOKXz6sFbw9
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。45Please respect copyright.PENANAPSoNf6JdeG
字數 8,28745Please respect copyright.PENANA06Kw251iaZ
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,45Please respect copyright.PENANA8Jm7DdROd7
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。45Please respect copyright.PENANA2OGaeUTdJZ
跟流水帳差不多(汗)45Please respect copyright.PENANAmDU911ABwF
卻沒有可以修改的方向。45Please respect copyright.PENANAChzl77K7vQ
問題應該出在節奏的安排,45Please respect copyright.PENANAq4ZogMcBms
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,45Please respect copyright.PENANAA5UqIj5Eoi
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,45Please respect copyright.PENANAFvVUuMjISd
到章末堆到最高點。45Please respect copyright.PENANAYrRnAQU9os
但是這一章一直平平的,45Please respect copyright.PENANAz1N45mWNR2
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點45Please respect copyright.PENANAty6tgfiSFs
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。45Please respect copyright.PENANA6pLOb7P9Wf
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,45Please respect copyright.PENANAQ5HluG91uP
接著寫下一章。45Please respect copyright.PENANAb6u0ZPQAje
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡45Please respect copyright.PENANAbHYiWa6qod
沒什麼思考能力。45Please respect copyright.PENANAFT28r1H3Mo
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。45Please respect copyright.PENANAbH5YDq8MYa
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。