寫作菜鳥日記 -4838Please respect copyright.PENANAKSniCpXusx
今天又寫了一整天,把第十七章完成了。38Please respect copyright.PENANABk8R9AClGQ
第十七章字數: 9,49338Please respect copyright.PENANAun67pOHg5b
總字數: 107,26038Please respect copyright.PENANAa7cFg3182D
今天寫的東西很累,但沒有昨天的那麼喜歡。38Please respect copyright.PENANAONp64mBIM1
畢竟昨天的內容是圍繞在主角群之間的細膩情感,38Please respect copyright.PENANAEvfZQrJ3xi
掙扎、自責、憤怒、失望、愛慕、忌妒,然後最後有一點小小喜悅。38Please respect copyright.PENANAtCIipdgCvM
是那種自己會邊寫邊笑的內容。38Please respect copyright.PENANApBVDwM1o7T
唯一缺點是看完會很想揍男主角一頓,有點欠打。38Please respect copyright.PENANA6zAhM3iKWN
今天的不同,38Please respect copyright.PENANAZ4UzERTKuD
只有最前面的一千字寫的是我喜歡的細膩又含蓄的情感,38Please respect copyright.PENANA76oXze4Zbt
甚至比以往的所有寫作都細膩,38Please respect copyright.PENANAhs76N3pgCk
放了很多隱諱的東西(然而怕讀者不懂,最後還是明講出來 XD)。38Please respect copyright.PENANArmmc6a724B
然後接下來就是38Please respect copyright.PENANA6oxv1hoM3E
大型的衝突、決裂、緊張壓抑的諜報劇情,陰謀和背叛。38Please respect copyright.PENANAuPJJOVWYtD
因為是我不喜歡的內容類型,38Please respect copyright.PENANAhzhkS5PVHi
所以我花比較多時間,花比較多腦力去寫,很累,38Please respect copyright.PENANAadErkHdyzb
但也很難分辨寫得好不好,有點討厭。38Please respect copyright.PENANAqZwFZLsLgm
要說起來,這一章的優點就是前一章欠揍的男主角稍微扳回一城,38Please respect copyright.PENANAXOGOr4Tu5r
還有可憐的女主角終於有發揮了,還對討厭的角色進行反擊。38Please respect copyright.PENANA4RJaXGKtOu
這個不是真反派的討厭角色,應該還會再讓他出場。38Please respect copyright.PENANArELKC1OiAs
然後,下一章應該會好寫一點。38Please respect copyright.PENANAlqPEPwRJ9W
期待明天了。
今天比較喜歡的對白應該是這兩個:38Please respect copyright.PENANAB8VZBmcbnh
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「別擔心,我們還沒輸。薩國這場仗,我來幫你打贏。」38Please respect copyright.PENANA6RhMGkbdsg
*38Please respect copyright.PENANANly0pKSFtT
「你想怎麼樣?」38Please respect copyright.PENANA2hRQqCVirx
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好吧,我知道第二個沒人看得懂為什麼我喜歡。38Please respect copyright.PENANAp7rlJuBFkk
這句其實是我很喜歡它出現的場合。38Please respect copyright.PENANAmcUcKzwR3a
老實說這一章我很難單獨抓出喜歡的對白,38Please respect copyright.PENANAkmaskoQziT
喜歡的部份都是一整段的。