寫作菜鳥日記 -4245Please respect copyright.PENANAg5Q2DMnwdw
今天沒往後面的章節寫,停在昨天的第十四回,45Please respect copyright.PENANAFFnDGRVqx7
反覆看反覆修改。45Please respect copyright.PENANALzfmOii4UY
畢竟一萬多字有很多要改,改完又多了一千多字,45Please respect copyright.PENANAaFSYDyRXiT
但其實我也有刪掉很多東西。45Please respect copyright.PENANADBKaIyCmWj
現在總字數 80,26245Please respect copyright.PENANANzAjXf74qH
第十四回目前修改到差不多可以看的程度,45Please respect copyright.PENANAzIfl7duC32
這一回我蠻喜歡的,不只是昨天說的挑戰不同敍事方式。45Please respect copyright.PENANAHG6Cic4lLI
這一回也是把一些原本模糊的概念清楚建立起來45Please respect copyright.PENANASNfL3MZmjE
不只是這作男主角的情感轉折,45Please respect copyright.PENANAd6GnjZJ1tH
還有前作男主角的情感轉折。45Please respect copyright.PENANA0QcdnGv6rT
因為這是他們第一次的交鋒,45Please respect copyright.PENANAi4eHRIT5Pb
雖然有很多我不熟悉的領域,只能靠想像力寫,45Please respect copyright.PENANA8xnpuc0kju
比如軍事演習,諜報情節,還有與王室的對談。45Please respect copyright.PENANAbcvxuQuNKA
雖然不完美,但這次是我寫作以來第一次覺得,45Please respect copyright.PENANATGAh52icTX
章節裡有自己覺得能稱得上是45Please respect copyright.PENANAHXfnTH55ZA
「寫得好」的句子45Please respect copyright.PENANAKdG9wHylzH
(雖然比不上別人,只是跟跟自己比)45Please respect copyright.PENANA2gaMesQjmy
跟之前一樣,我寫完會朗讀一遍,確定有沒有還沒改好的,45Please respect copyright.PENANAfFPVh98EJu
這次比較難,45Please respect copyright.PENANAbEX835pQep
除了字數很多要唸很久以外,45Please respect copyright.PENANA9nMi7PsJrY
唸到某些部份會太嗨,每次一定會太開心笑出來。45Please respect copyright.PENANALF6Z2aHQpB
我真的很喜歡那種病態的感情。45Please respect copyright.PENANASK8kU3yydU
現在另一個問題是,我擔心之後沒辦法寫出同樣喜歡的篇章。
一覺醒來,對下一章的故事有靈感了,也許可以寫了。(呃⋯⋯昨天說好的要戒成癮症狀的?喂?)45Please respect copyright.PENANAGmCoPraH0A
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