寫作菜鳥日記 -12636Please respect copyright.PENANAbSnxi86md7
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。36Please respect copyright.PENANARrYoAaWsBP
字數 8,28736Please respect copyright.PENANAA3MLd7zyhk
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,36Please respect copyright.PENANAWEiZbIlVth
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。36Please respect copyright.PENANAIrFHt4WbBG
跟流水帳差不多(汗)36Please respect copyright.PENANAoSHh75PBO0
卻沒有可以修改的方向。36Please respect copyright.PENANASZE8lTizWO
問題應該出在節奏的安排,36Please respect copyright.PENANAxcJycLI9N0
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,36Please respect copyright.PENANAqTl0GykpqJ
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,36Please respect copyright.PENANAHvJXffvTMP
到章末堆到最高點。36Please respect copyright.PENANAfAi6oRmFF3
但是這一章一直平平的,36Please respect copyright.PENANAXGupDKiuAM
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點36Please respect copyright.PENANAAkiFVaXsUM
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。36Please respect copyright.PENANAzfA6aymbI8
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,36Please respect copyright.PENANAyubxXipvzM
接著寫下一章。36Please respect copyright.PENANAl1Ui7A47ZZ
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡36Please respect copyright.PENANAto7TQTiMTq
沒什麼思考能力。36Please respect copyright.PENANApLDfiXJbOf
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。36Please respect copyright.PENANAL30OcvemGJ
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。