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這個平台說11個小時可以看完我的作品
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Author: 就只是一隻大貓
Published:
Jun 22, 2025
這個平台說11個小時可以看完我的作品
Published:
Jun 22, 2025
ENTRY #1
感覺開頭的詩不太對稱
Author: 就只是一隻大貓
Published:
Jun 22, 2025
1 Min Read
177 Words
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小說剛點進去開頭的詩就感覺有點怪，讓我來猜猜作者在想啥。

語無聲是用語言本該有聲但現在無聲音，來達成一種語言本質上的悖論，但是名無名是雙重否定，可能是借鑒老子的道德經，不知道。

如果要連動上一句語無聲，那名字應該是本該有意義卻沒意義，所以名應該無意才對啊。

感覺這樣改順多了，但也可能是我無法看透作者的想法。

265Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuGmcdqZKlr

《骨內之聲》

若語無聲,誰記骨中殘火?

若名無意,誰知舌上之刃?

265Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs9zdagRUEF

好吧事實證明我不懂作者在想啥。

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