很對不起主角(^～^;)ゞ
落日比曦晨是國二初期四本短篇創作的第三本，當時真的很隨意亂寫，是單元式短篇，主角舒霣（允）幾乎是很扁平的角色。
後來在要放到狂人時，覺得故事太爛，開啟打掉重練模式，重新編寫大綱，給舒霣一個完整的背景故事（番外），但寫著越來越不對勁，舒霣是立體了，但她變好慘啊，死了一遍還不能休息，硬是被上天（我嗎？）拉去其他身體裡繼續痛苦掙扎存活……
真的對不起啊（鞠躬
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端午節創作挑戰 - 糉‧地獄
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May 27, 2025
ENTRY #28
改寫《落日比曦晨》時我覺得……
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雲兮玥
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