CHAPTER FIVE556Please respect copyright.PENANAmwR0UDEMnh
The bell had rung twice already, but Musa hadn’t moved from the window. His shirt clung damply to his back, sweat from a sleepless night and the kind of fear that doesn't shake off by morning. 556Please respect copyright.PENANAXus4IoZEmG
The compound outside was waking up slowly—boys yelling half-hearted insults across the quad, buckets slamming against concrete at the water taps, the usual mtu ni mechi leo! —indicating a laid-back, carefree bravado bouncing between Form Fours.556Please respect copyright.PENANAk4RzQpbX2W
But he wasn’t hearing any of it.556Please respect copyright.PENANAX3NrgjrYB5
His eyes were fixed on the far wall.556Please respect copyright.PENANAvbxFBL7dtE
The one they called dunda.556Please respect copyright.PENANA38lsukl7kY
Not its real name, of course. But among a few of them—the ones who’d listened more than they talked—it meant something. A place where things crossed. Notes. Looks. Sometimes, people.556Please respect copyright.PENANAHuhw5XlNgv
And last night, they’d crossed it.556Please respect copyright.PENANAlNiNhYLhLY
He still felt the burn in his arms from pulling himself up and over. Still heard the sharp breath of Otieno behind him, limping on the way back from that forbidden path.556Please respect copyright.PENANAjVB1mDPp8T
Musa turned from the window, eyes falling on the side pocket of his school bag.556Please respect copyright.PENANAzHP7OAk1Ok
Inside, folded carefully between the cover of a torn CRE exercise book, was the first letter.556Please respect copyright.PENANAY8URdsB1sF
"To the girl with the sunflower hair ribbon..."556Please respect copyright.PENANA6sLRreBXeZ
He never got to send it. Someone had beaten him to the wall.556Please respect copyright.PENANAQoevlA5mUE
But now it was too late.556Please respect copyright.PENANAjkwRb7iYGy
Because last night, something changed. For months now, Musa had crossed it.556Please respect copyright.PENANAXe4RqwYQ2Z
Quietly. Carefully.556Please respect copyright.PENANARHZRoE2t32
Never to meet anyone specific. Not at first. It had started with passing notes, coded jokes, half-written lyrics, little trades. Some of the girls would meet them at the vines in the wall during preps or when the bell rang late. Never faces. Just fingers passing folded paper. Voices whispered through leaves.556Please respect copyright.PENANACJr93yKM7i
And sometimes… more. Otieno had someone. Musa had... no one.556Please respect copyright.PENANAsJweN4RPws
Except the smile.556Please respect copyright.PENANAPjIS6UKEz3
That one smile. From the Madaraka Day parade a year back. She had stood there, yellow ribbon in her hair, laughing quietly at something her friend whispered. That moment had carved itself into him like a signature on wet cement.556Please respect copyright.PENANAeBUgeiJfyq
He had crossed the wall five times since that day. Whispered with at least three different girls. Swapped lines of poetry he barely understood. But never her.556Please respect copyright.PENANAqxLFiHBCL4
Never the girl with the sunflower ribbon.556Please respect copyright.PENANALlkAEXHmD0
And as his feet hit the ground, he whispered to himself—barely louder than the wind:556Please respect copyright.PENANAAwn7iEMKot
“I’ll find you. One day.”556Please respect copyright.PENANAnykb8KL9kW
He didn’t know her name. Never heard her speak. But he remembered her.556Please respect copyright.PENANAr8LoNCOMFF
It had been during the Jamhuri Day inspection the year before, when both schools were assembled on the Jaramogi Oginga Odinga Sports Complex grounds. The sun had been brutal, melting through blazers and brows, the kind of heat that blurred vision and time.556Please respect copyright.PENANAFr4dGyd2wy
Boys stood in lines on one side of the field. Girls on the other. A gulf of baked red earth between them. She had been near the front of the girls’ group—second or third row. Her posture was sharper than the rest. Back straight, eyes forward, the kind of discipline that made a student stand out.556Please respect copyright.PENANAnlfzQj5nuO
But what caught Musa wasn’t how she stood. It was what she wore.556Please respect copyright.PENANAvWJ7ZB5wng
A yellow ribbon, tied around her bun.556Please respect copyright.PENANA16vJjI0s8t
Not school regulation. Not loud either. But defiant.556Please respect copyright.PENANAC46GKz2lOD
A silent flare of color in a world that punished difference.556Please respect copyright.PENANAjQ8AV4JmIL
And then—she laughed.556Please respect copyright.PENANASDkRC1ZsG6
Quickly, quietly. Her friend must have whispered something. Her hand flew to her mouth, but the smile broke through. Just for a second. He saw it from across the field and something about it cracked open a window inside him.556Please respect copyright.PENANAmuY19c5Pp1
She didn’t look his way. Probably never would.556Please respect copyright.PENANAjqBhgzHTLm
But from that day on, when he walked past the far end of the wall—the part the girls called dunda too—he always slowed his steps.556Please respect copyright.PENANAaanBr3q3lc
Just a little.556Please respect copyright.PENANAPRMCTaYENM
In case something waited on the other side
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In the stillness of the night, truths are neither seen nor said—but known.
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