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*木魚之肆*
ENTRY #6
Author: 一更打燈
Published:
May 13, 2025
*木魚之肆*
Published:
May 13, 2025
ENTRY #6
來自一更打燈的【書評請求】
Author: 一更打燈
Published:
May 13, 2025
1 Min Read
140 Words
No Plagiarism!GPn7nvnp87jD14U1rbB6posted on PＥNAＮＡ

待評作品：《距離冰封末世，我只剩下3個月》

指定評價範圍：到第8回，之後如果有再更新的話，木魚就隨意看要不要納入書評範圍

希望針對的部分：人物形象、劇情架構、事件邏輯和文筆

力度：別太用力，這個作者有點脆，如果真的看不下去可以點出看不下去的章節然後說明看不下去的原因

感謝木魚大大的書評，在此奉上1000P幣進入獎池以表感謝。

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