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【評文活動紀錄】嵐斕子在評文
ISSUE #66
Author: 嵐斕
【評文活動紀錄】嵐斕子在評文
Author: 嵐斕
ISSUE #66
【評文】《聖德薩斯之影》
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作品：【天火系列】聖德薩斯之影158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFh7AMDpBPo

類別：奇幻

作者：諾蒂西亞158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjRZ8q6rgDe

評論日期：2025/08/29

評論章節：#1～#2

希望評論的方向：隨嵐斕

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZkeuvpEX7S

以下為評文正文：

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此部小說也屬天火系列，是外傳之一。

是帶點中亞、東歐等地域色彩的故事。

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWUnJWWQCe1

沙登流傳著一個鬼故事，吃人鬼影會在吃了人後，變成所吃之人的模樣。

背後有什麼真相？又為何流出此傳說？

嵐斕在這就不多贅述劇透，請看作品。

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqEgEZMWMXp

文筆的部分，在天火五部曲跟梨花雨的評文中有提，在這不多評價，總之十分優秀。158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUij0UpXkfy

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYpGi0Z9Opw

角色塑造的部分，薩拉雅有吸引讀者想探究她背後的故事，不過目前篇幅太短，屬於鮮明，尚未立體的階段。

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4kj39IqIll

劇情編排的部分，目前看起來會猜測一樣與戰爭有關，背後牽扯眾多勢力，未偏離天火系列奇幻史詩的感覺。但一樣篇幅過短，難以確定猜測。

158Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡctfIFE3YlX

總結。

目前篇幅尚短，但已是一個吸引人好奇的開頭。

最後，給諾蒂西亞大大：

挖坑了，放餌吸引讀者了，請記得填坑，妳的讀者們嗷嗷待哺哦。

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