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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！ - 宇文庭想請凌曉潔評論〈御龍使外傳之龍庭主＆月清幽的初相識〉的「讀後心得」 | Penana

創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！

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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！

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Author:

林忠廷

Published:

May 28, 2025

創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！

Published:

May 28, 2025

ENTRY #622

宇文庭想請凌曉潔評論〈御龍使外傳之龍庭主＆月清幽的初相識〉的「讀後心得」

Author:

林忠廷

Published:

May 28, 2025

1 Min Read

126 Words

作者介紹：吾乃宇文庭，名字來源是〈說唐〉裡面的隋朝將軍宇文成都以及只活到328歲的單鋒劍尊宇文天

〈評論方向〉：感情戲是否過於生硬或者角色的互動方式有問題，以及情節是否過於牽強，還望閣下不吝指教。

想請凌姑娘評論的原因是：〈步土豆〉那篇是我寫的

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