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文筆很平凡，有在努力減少文章中的問題，希望有一天可以寫完自己的中學生涯改篇的故事。71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmgMF6oNf9
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【需求：讀者心得，指定「凌曉潔」】71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf2HYKbliIg
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上回提要(#507) ：71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfXNc5XHmTm
version 6變version 7 變version 8變version 8.1(我不覺得這是version 9)了這次，version 8.1又不一樣了，我想我一年前一定不會想到自己本來塞了一大票角色的錯誤開局可以刪改至在#1-#8中只有三個中文名嗚嗚。71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVeckHMfUOd
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既然我看到可以重複弄上來，那我就又又又上來了，再再再拿100幣出來，可惡已經連土也吃不起了。71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTkCpJDOOKd
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按順序，這次我要指定名單上的第四名——凌曉潔。71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQS7BsGZfhN
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看到[1-7]就可以了，主要只想問兩個基本問題:71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9HrbupU3Qt
1.看得出主角團在哪嗎?71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡif2akqvHAL
2.如有,主角團的表層人設有沒有出來?71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ97e7wjJHjx
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雖然我感覺又又又改明顯了，但按照經驗我的感覺通常是錯的⋯⋯71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUWx760uyIL
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重覆一次，本人自知作品有很多不足，有不足的儘管指出。71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡthOrVX6gSv
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