【自我介紹+正文】
我本人很喜歡大女主、雙強這兩項設定，所以筆下的主角一向不會太笨，而《孤玉伴月》也是如此，女主獨立清醒，且帶有馬甲，智力與武力都極強，是一部古風愛情故事。
【需求】
希望橘柚可以幫我看看最新章（#29）的架構、張力、劇情等是否吸睛，以及有哪些需要改進的地方。
連結：https://www.penana.com/article/1716823
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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！
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離月霜想邀請橘柚看《孤玉伴月》寫書評
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