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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
ENTRY #60
Author: 詩妍妍
Published:
May 17, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
Published:
May 17, 2025
ENTRY #60
改寫童話／暗黑反轉童話短篇集
Author: 詩妍妍
Published:
May 17, 2025
1 Min Read
113 Words
No Plagiarism!nUKXGPK6xdV9RfHHxroOposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.改寫童話／暗黑／短篇

2.希望評論第一章，白雪公主的篇章

3.希望評論的方向：劇情流暢／風格的吸引度／角色塑造／場景描述／故事的個性／改寫部分（保留核心，重組元素）的地方處理得如何／故事的餘韻

4.評論的力度：請吹毛求疵309Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrUOsIDfaFP

P.S.辛苦你了～評論的部分還有甚麼想說的一定要提！

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