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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文（試辦）
ENTRY #49
Author: 旁觀者
Published:
May 13, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文（試辦）
Published:
May 13, 2025
ENTRY #49
《神侍軍：贖罪者》
Author: 旁觀者
Published:
May 13, 2025
1 Min Read
205 Words
No Plagiarism!q8Sk2uObtRZgNhVlzD2Uposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.作品名：《神侍軍：贖罪者》

2.類型：架空歷史、黑暗劇情、戰爭

3.章節：新城區的第3連(五)至(十四)，字數為20,653字，應該還行?

4.方向：除了希望能得到最直觀的感想外，也想請大大看看這樣的寫法能否給予讀者足夠的沉浸感?

4.力度：吹毛求疵45Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIrfPQYKyjT
45Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡck3TGATnL8
5.前情提要：主角莉莉身為教團的死刑犯，被編入前線部隊「贖罪旅」充當砲灰。在最終章，其所屬的贖罪旅第３連奉命攻打有重機槍把守的喬治銀行，而身處敵對陣營、正苦苦找尋莉莉的哥哥瓦特也正在支援的路上，兄妹倆在戰場上的最終命運即將揭曉......45Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIQgnJPMs7u

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