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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文（試辦）
ENTRY #4
Author: 永玄
Published:
Apr 30, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文（試辦）
Published:
Apr 30, 2025
ENTRY #4
劍骨流光
Author: 永玄
Published:
Apr 30, 2025
1 Min Read
218 Words
No Plagiarism!zcAbOkabYqy978kbeLCcposted on PＥNAＮＡ

感謝舉辦創挑！來試試投評文

1.作品名&類別：劍骨流光/修真言情

2.希望評論章節（章節加起來的字數請少於兩萬）：簡介+第一章～第五章

https://m.penana.com/story/179259/

3.希望評論的方向（注重點在劇情流暢？文筆？角色塑造？其他？還是隨嵐斕？）：希望著重在劇情節奏，並以讀者視角說出是否有想看下去的感覺，以及有哪些可改善缺點。簡介的部分希望可以幫我看看是否吸引人以及有什麼建議

4.評論的力度（求誇誇？溫柔點？隨嵐斕？嚴厲點？請吹毛求疵？）：吹毛求疵

5.前情提要（選填，如果希望評論的章節需要前情提要才看得懂，請簡單提及世界觀與前面角色“剛”發生什麼）

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