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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
ENTRY #68
Author: 嵐斕
Published:
May 20, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
Published:
May 20, 2025
ENTRY #68
【評文】短篇作品《小美系列》
Author: 嵐斕
Published:
May 20, 2025
1 Min Read
201 Words
No Plagiarism!yzerqkEbuJBJWxkRxpfjposted on PＥNAＮＡ

你好，感謝參加創挑。

評論章節：#1～#35

351Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFS1ls9IWSi

小美系列的故事每篇約兩百字以內，簡單提及這一世穿越轉生而來的小美在什麼時代背景，她是什麼身份，有什麼成就，對此方世界有什麼影響。

每篇還會附上靈魂畫手插圖，給單篇增添趣味。

351Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3f7TgiPlSI

其實嵐斕會建議小美系列如果想要成為IP，不應該主要以文字呈現。

以靈魂畫手插圖去把每篇的小故事製作成短影音，再配上旁白，或許會更好。

351Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhocH75eidV

故事太短，文字顯得蒼白，小美無法真正有記憶點。

如果配上圖畫與聲音會比較有機會讓人記住。

351Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKcYbow01DW

 以上是嵐斕的建議。加油哦！

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