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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
ENTRY #37
Author: 六下生
Published:
May 10, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第一期（試辦）
Published:
May 10, 2025
ENTRY #37
Eclipse: 黑月臨世
Author: 六下生
Published:
May 10, 2025
1 Min Read
150 Words
No Plagiarism!q45SsErwusARlTRCFF8vposted on PＥNAＮＡ

安安，感謝作者舉辦創挑，因為我想要知道讀者對這部作品的想法，所以想請作者幫忙看看我的作品

作品名：Eclipse: 黑月臨世

作品類別：奇幻

希望評論章節：第一章到第五章

作品連結：https://www.penana.com/story/179250

評論方向：想要詢問劇情流暢度，讀者看了會不會困惑(可能有細節沒做好)？文筆好壞；角色塑造(能力方面我很好奇讀者會不會疑惑)

評論力度：隨作者即可，請別手下留情。

感謝(鞠躬

216.73.216.67

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