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【黑暗遊戲】，潘朵拉之心！(白話：閱讀挑戰活動~)
ENTRY #10
Author: 鶄
Published:
Apr 11, 2025
【黑暗遊戲】，潘朵拉之心！(白話：閱讀挑戰活動~)
Published:
Apr 11, 2025
ENTRY #10
在你筆下，請你延長我的生命 第一部 (F角色，傳說中的書評)
Author: 鶄
Published:
Apr 11, 2025
1 Min Read
184 Words
No Plagiarism!Fsv72PFhI02rgXaNW3bfposted on PＥNAＮＡ

這是我一直都在打的小說，之前已經完成第一部，基本上情節大致都不會變了，所以想問一下意見。

簡單介紹一下背景

在90年代初期的日本，宮崎翔突然忽發奇想，開始撰寫自己的第一個故事。在他下筆之際，故事裏的角色竟然走了出來，阻止故事的發展？這是一個自覺得世界有所虧欠自己的少年，慢慢尋找自己價值的故事。260Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfaVY4kQ1h5

260Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqlipgi2uXr

大約都是想問吸引力足不足夠，合不合理等等，歡迎任何意見。

狠狠評吧。

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AyCcJI-hXRWxMv9pRL-Yb2dxxguQ8fbjTx3MW5Zyg5I/edit?usp=sharing​​​​​​​

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260Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe1hYmleUzn

260Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF5OMGo360D

(希望不要被「無法分析」吧 QAQ)  

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