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幫我看我的小說開頭給意見
ENTRY #1
Author: 謝璇
Published:
Apr 1, 2025
幫我看我的小說開頭給意見
Published:
Apr 1, 2025
ENTRY #1
閱讀意見
Author: 謝璇
Published:
Apr 1, 2025
1 Min Read
202 Words
No Plagiarism!xrv2Bk0UZ7djkwRyvWF3posted on PＥNAＮＡ

以虛構歷史開頭，具有一定的史詩感，我認為相當不錯。但可以在加一些說明，因為總覺得有些簡略。

小說敘述文筆文風方面，我覺得還滿華麗的，暫時沒有挑剔的地方。

收費機制我覺得滿不錯的一點是有顧及到無法課金或不想課金的人，可以不付一毛錢看全部。

428Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGXoirbSpCd

白嫖賽高！！！

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不過就算是不同會員也有差別待遇也太扯。設定時不會很累嗎？

取名滿淺顯易懂的，就直接：普通、VIP、晶耀VIP會員

其他還有就是伏筆和重點的部分，還特別粗體加黑，十分用心。

（那應該是有伏筆吧！希望沒有搞錯。

428Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUQJCGJQGdK

問題三

可可亞老師。

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