其實這首並不算正式的詩,211Please respect copyright.PENANAyrOwYuLDsG
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,211Please respect copyright.PENANATHy3Cickx6
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)211Please respect copyright.PENANA5zFvroBgHw
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~211Please respect copyright.PENANAjlCviKD41q
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,211Please respect copyright.PENANADryCPdxXto
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),211Please respect copyright.PENANAf4ysRqD6kh
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,211Please respect copyright.PENANA22PevLPLzU
我開始寫書法。211Please respect copyright.PENANAOx1P8v50VB
這個書法的第一句叫做211Please respect copyright.PENANAPcNKKhaDHT
「天地無用」211Please respect copyright.PENANA86xtw8AhAK
結果用這個字偏小,211Please respect copyright.PENANALWBG1pjsC6
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,211Please respect copyright.PENANAYY6PtP1e4f
所以才會越寫越沒自信~211Please respect copyright.PENANAB0AZ8c8kFS
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,211Please respect copyright.PENANANmiAlUIdIa
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用211Please respect copyright.PENANAHye6F3NRGP
山河不移211Please respect copyright.PENANA8zB2GPyZkf
人間有情211Please respect copyright.PENANAfDdsRuIuRX
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,211Please respect copyright.PENANAe77UCJGO3F
似乎練了1~2個小時,211Please respect copyright.PENANAxZzocBRmEe
不過字的大小幾乎一致,211Please respect copyright.PENANADLrmZCUlah
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,211Please respect copyright.PENANAyPwGFU0JMq
但是心終於靜下來,211Please respect copyright.PENANAevL4TR4yKE
只是手也爆酸~211Please respect copyright.PENANAtSbgfQVPOa
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。211Please respect copyright.PENANAv9tTjY1JnO
第一句的天地無用,211Please respect copyright.PENANA27N8oE6jv4
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。211Please respect copyright.PENANACLughuYsI7
第二句的山河不移,211Please respect copyright.PENANAqM7jL3jovt
其實也可以寫作山海不移,211Please respect copyright.PENANA2fQjaDycX4
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),211Please respect copyright.PENANAHgeH7KDTio
所以才改用河。211Please respect copyright.PENANA6CUR28tSmR
其實跟第一句類似,就是211Please respect copyright.PENANAMlm8B5p3VM
山不轉,路轉。211Please respect copyright.PENANAOE996RWt0v
路不轉,人轉。211Please respect copyright.PENANAUZ898M9ykX
的意思。211Please respect copyright.PENANA9EEeiFNMw4
第三句的人間有情,211Please respect copyright.PENANAn5Sbikm0sg
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,211Please respect copyright.PENANA3wRf2FnP1l
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,211Please respect copyright.PENANAgnXBqQzrjE
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。211Please respect copyright.PENANAQd7otXT17K
最後一句的日月無雙,211Please respect copyright.PENANAGn72x3EJbP
指的就是一枝草一滴露,211Please respect copyright.PENANAYM2sqntP1q
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,211Please respect copyright.PENANAYbGWWZEZbI
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的211Please respect copyright.PENANA18fGhDmLvZ
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!211Please respect copyright.PENANAOkysH42Lao
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),211Please respect copyright.PENANAAy5pBvr7Cf
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~211Please respect copyright.PENANAd0KyzZZey7
再回來看看那首詩:211Please respect copyright.PENANAMULhRZ9kNL
第一句的天地無用,211Please respect copyright.PENANANvkKrGaS96
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,211Please respect copyright.PENANAwrmlT4fccQ
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,211Please respect copyright.PENANAxBx5iUwHC8
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~211Please respect copyright.PENANAPCKQt8qaHd
即使平常看起來懶散,211Please respect copyright.PENANAw0W6DMqodJ
對戰時卻不馬虎~211Please respect copyright.PENANAE0dSRoZu0s
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,211Please respect copyright.PENANAoOcfHujrwj
就能達到這樣的成就~211Please respect copyright.PENANAAOKPwaZDjo
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,211Please respect copyright.PENANA1tVtJZmCVk
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。211Please respect copyright.PENANA2RY5Vjq5aO
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,211Please respect copyright.PENANAKsR4v5VJqe
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~211Please respect copyright.PENANAGRefMXJmsf(除非你作弊使用神獸)211Please respect copyright.PENANAU4wF9ef4rv
即便龍系也有弱點,211Please respect copyright.PENANAMYlC6JzDmZ
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、211Please respect copyright.PENANAef7zOkywIZ
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,211Please respect copyright.PENANAYL8YFasR5M
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、211Please respect copyright.PENANAmkJ2mzyfrL
紫竽又指責他、211Please respect copyright.PENANAztlaEb1Oi8
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,211Please respect copyright.PENANA4TGs4ERO4J
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~211Please respect copyright.PENANAHCVexiw5sA
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,211Please respect copyright.PENANAL3ZnhhBH6E
這句其實是這首詩的重點,211Please respect copyright.PENANA3gfEaamtw2
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~211Please respect copyright.PENANAxpW3QilwPV
意思是希望他不要計較特別,211Please respect copyright.PENANArsxalzBK55
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,211Please respect copyright.PENANA1HHBVrpC2u
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」211Please respect copyright.PENANAmHvgjdHy5o
我們常常會著重在Special上面,211Please respect copyright.PENANAdhY6tSELM6
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...211Please respect copyright.PENANAYJ2TCN31jM
這些都是各種意義上的Special,211Please respect copyright.PENANAhOp3MJr2Bn
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,211Please respect copyright.PENANACCNGoc6avT
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,211Please respect copyright.PENANAE6thuuQTxW
甚至舉步維艱...211Please respect copyright.PENANAtxPzJ9gxS2
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,211Please respect copyright.PENANA5hmqXGYEPD
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,211Please respect copyright.PENANA5b26nCWp8t
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,211Please respect copyright.PENANA4ApmvDUDfT
甚至我認為複製人,211Please respect copyright.PENANAbKYhENS8JC
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?211Please respect copyright.PENANAnZ6XPLollQ
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,211Please respect copyright.PENANAVNIt33RbnY
這是為什麼呢?211Please respect copyright.PENANAJKO6cWlOh4
還有留級三年看似無所謂,211Please respect copyright.PENANAAuGEu8mpgo
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,211Please respect copyright.PENANA62BTB1x88b
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~211Please respect copyright.PENANAi0rdMofW2J
除了獻給學長這首詩,211Please respect copyright.PENANABCef13nnAG
也希望自己能做到~211Please respect copyright.PENANA3WIdoQUnhO
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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