其實這首並不算正式的詩,36Please respect copyright.PENANA0c8gKwnUHs
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,36Please respect copyright.PENANAxwtiWVaUSZ
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)36Please respect copyright.PENANAHSpNPuqUud
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~36Please respect copyright.PENANAKrCltAOOU8
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,36Please respect copyright.PENANAriOosQOjxf
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),36Please respect copyright.PENANAGNeeaguVzE
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,36Please respect copyright.PENANAWh1TlrSQyc
我開始寫書法。36Please respect copyright.PENANA2yfgLsbcLC
這個書法的第一句叫做36Please respect copyright.PENANAFVSzy12MHf
「天地無用」36Please respect copyright.PENANAJAHexagAxG
結果用這個字偏小,36Please respect copyright.PENANAIF29SUF3fh
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,36Please respect copyright.PENANAzg9naBNq7P
所以才會越寫越沒自信~36Please respect copyright.PENANAGAAaxACipG
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,36Please respect copyright.PENANAkDedZ2YYTV
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用36Please respect copyright.PENANAFINkL2ZZNR
山河不移36Please respect copyright.PENANAYXI6UKWGqm
人間有情36Please respect copyright.PENANAGVznH8AfcR
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,36Please respect copyright.PENANANPArVw1ADq
似乎練了1~2個小時,36Please respect copyright.PENANAV2tEzVnvp4
不過字的大小幾乎一致,36Please respect copyright.PENANAVfFrMrVcoB
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,36Please respect copyright.PENANAm2IXKOZuD8
但是心終於靜下來,36Please respect copyright.PENANAZ2N3nMhi9P
只是手也爆酸~36Please respect copyright.PENANA7TdNoSiXlk
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。36Please respect copyright.PENANAkhKD9Ko6X8
第一句的天地無用,36Please respect copyright.PENANA0MQGJdenWL
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。36Please respect copyright.PENANACLDnuqCSxH
第二句的山河不移,36Please respect copyright.PENANApt5p7JWBam
其實也可以寫作山海不移,36Please respect copyright.PENANAWwMfEj8xHl
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),36Please respect copyright.PENANAzpK34nGolM
所以才改用河。36Please respect copyright.PENANAEgquJW6a3D
其實跟第一句類似,就是36Please respect copyright.PENANAGvcmfUCSRU
山不轉,路轉。36Please respect copyright.PENANAM7kKxn7uHr
路不轉,人轉。36Please respect copyright.PENANAnfup0hI5MN
的意思。36Please respect copyright.PENANAFkUjBYBp1a
第三句的人間有情,36Please respect copyright.PENANA0EsaRm6P5v
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,36Please respect copyright.PENANAdxSpw3BF6p
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,36Please respect copyright.PENANAf7OdZnIveI
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。36Please respect copyright.PENANAooCT1Fn5Jj
最後一句的日月無雙,36Please respect copyright.PENANAPG3Prd40C1
指的就是一枝草一滴露,36Please respect copyright.PENANAAeZo8ittx3
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,36Please respect copyright.PENANAf649FyzfpF
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的36Please respect copyright.PENANA6K6hOQLKAe
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!36Please respect copyright.PENANAR4J81s84q5
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),36Please respect copyright.PENANAhvEO2sscp7
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~36Please respect copyright.PENANAlWcWLD7Pg1
再回來看看那首詩:36Please respect copyright.PENANAPqVIDwHjn3
第一句的天地無用,36Please respect copyright.PENANAlLUqmCbwVe
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,36Please respect copyright.PENANAW0uWmQes86
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,36Please respect copyright.PENANAStdyEXfKSq
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~36Please respect copyright.PENANA9Alu5ISwhl
即使平常看起來懶散,36Please respect copyright.PENANAy5QM76dDM5
對戰時卻不馬虎~36Please respect copyright.PENANACAMqh72FG4
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,36Please respect copyright.PENANAmX6HUJr39i
就能達到這樣的成就~36Please respect copyright.PENANAmdlRRzEWiB
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,36Please respect copyright.PENANAgYOzFdVsBj
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。36Please respect copyright.PENANA9dImZRsHer
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,36Please respect copyright.PENANAOX4AHZO16w
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~36Please respect copyright.PENANAQ5mqPPH9Ya(除非你作弊使用神獸)36Please respect copyright.PENANA3t7GUZPkC7
即便龍系也有弱點,36Please respect copyright.PENANAFhMhW9VgcS
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、36Please respect copyright.PENANAI3BoSEKwDo
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,36Please respect copyright.PENANAbyYc7Mplhv
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、36Please respect copyright.PENANAYvW9bPxRBY
紫竽又指責他、36Please respect copyright.PENANANLbWo34oNV
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,36Please respect copyright.PENANAEoLy0tI7S2
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~36Please respect copyright.PENANAEtAZdzvTPk
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,36Please respect copyright.PENANA5tOWG5bFai
這句其實是這首詩的重點,36Please respect copyright.PENANAGUXCCLOz4h
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~36Please respect copyright.PENANAVbtGwJMiAM
意思是希望他不要計較特別,36Please respect copyright.PENANA9uokl7yueA
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,36Please respect copyright.PENANAOvOmFackVm
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」36Please respect copyright.PENANAzGnq47ijQ6
我們常常會著重在Special上面,36Please respect copyright.PENANAJzjuY08WWI
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...36Please respect copyright.PENANAMnyIs2oAhR
這些都是各種意義上的Special,36Please respect copyright.PENANATk5xXooh7a
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,36Please respect copyright.PENANAd9fqTzjt8W
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,36Please respect copyright.PENANA1OenAKCn68
甚至舉步維艱...36Please respect copyright.PENANA3cU9Sssy2x
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,36Please respect copyright.PENANAoE6jJ1WCFL
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,36Please respect copyright.PENANArjN9kW7E7i
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,36Please respect copyright.PENANAbp00TkQN4Q
甚至我認為複製人,36Please respect copyright.PENANAA9hbHn0zOl
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?36Please respect copyright.PENANAMpSsEDKcDJ
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,36Please respect copyright.PENANAtw0rCCReeg
這是為什麼呢?36Please respect copyright.PENANA892NR75ijU
還有留級三年看似無所謂,36Please respect copyright.PENANAiUNK4gy6yW
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,36Please respect copyright.PENANAFqU5F0hri5
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~36Please respect copyright.PENANAJdjhTfnZW6
除了獻給學長這首詩,36Please respect copyright.PENANAD1p5oArSzI
也希望自己能做到~36Please respect copyright.PENANA4Q8kWqxFL5
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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