其實這首並不算正式的詩,35Please respect copyright.PENANAVOBMs8djvG
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,35Please respect copyright.PENANAjwcMOdKK3x
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)35Please respect copyright.PENANA7b97R4HRaA
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~35Please respect copyright.PENANAhoKH4px5fm
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,35Please respect copyright.PENANAiszperPOsz
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),35Please respect copyright.PENANAqPLsZB0JTA
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,35Please respect copyright.PENANAKLfnmB1ZQr
我開始寫書法。35Please respect copyright.PENANAeO80tGhFnq
這個書法的第一句叫做35Please respect copyright.PENANAA6OWnfxeuj
「天地無用」35Please respect copyright.PENANAbtCujUBYSh
結果用這個字偏小,35Please respect copyright.PENANAELNgNheCvq
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,35Please respect copyright.PENANA9L4PAOPpEY
所以才會越寫越沒自信~35Please respect copyright.PENANAOLDYISi0ls
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,35Please respect copyright.PENANA3U1Fje6NS6
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用35Please respect copyright.PENANAsWk51WTBSV
山河不移35Please respect copyright.PENANAIQW7Gu5Y7a
人間有情35Please respect copyright.PENANA1K1KDhwXov
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,35Please respect copyright.PENANA3t6nuJB9Xl
似乎練了1~2個小時,35Please respect copyright.PENANAKVnJDc2jn0
不過字的大小幾乎一致,35Please respect copyright.PENANA9iTWcEJexp
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,35Please respect copyright.PENANAkuLd6Syqfo
但是心終於靜下來,35Please respect copyright.PENANAfo8Mfo5Aam
只是手也爆酸~35Please respect copyright.PENANAv7ft6UUzxl
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。35Please respect copyright.PENANAbR5TrGIGhp
第一句的天地無用,35Please respect copyright.PENANABW7PqEY7QO
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。35Please respect copyright.PENANAbZAfG7OPgW
第二句的山河不移,35Please respect copyright.PENANAKvAjHEaAsf
其實也可以寫作山海不移,35Please respect copyright.PENANAcjAgmRPxls
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),35Please respect copyright.PENANApcy81hpjy4
所以才改用河。35Please respect copyright.PENANA4j2iLqQacV
其實跟第一句類似,就是35Please respect copyright.PENANA8FUqgGMILQ
山不轉,路轉。35Please respect copyright.PENANAYU92DQMFyK
路不轉,人轉。35Please respect copyright.PENANAWoteVSYism
的意思。35Please respect copyright.PENANAwqAneSFNlF
第三句的人間有情,35Please respect copyright.PENANAXSn5bDXHmz
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,35Please respect copyright.PENANA2nK5ey4t91
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,35Please respect copyright.PENANAY64a3OpqfH
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。35Please respect copyright.PENANAFOHfgMzI01
最後一句的日月無雙,35Please respect copyright.PENANAVBbg58XLIv
指的就是一枝草一滴露,35Please respect copyright.PENANAmQOCua6aUj
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,35Please respect copyright.PENANAHBqewu7UlZ
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的35Please respect copyright.PENANAQfJsoUFKfl
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!35Please respect copyright.PENANAST8AkhBJyE
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),35Please respect copyright.PENANA2U47Pq8UqH
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~35Please respect copyright.PENANA2geqdzIdp3
再回來看看那首詩:35Please respect copyright.PENANAoeWDDCLfDn
第一句的天地無用,35Please respect copyright.PENANAQREIKRVwfI
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,35Please respect copyright.PENANA0soPWLgb3s
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,35Please respect copyright.PENANA0Rf5OfZDQT
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~35Please respect copyright.PENANAoFZLpi1hqr
即使平常看起來懶散,35Please respect copyright.PENANAuHsXyapA3R
對戰時卻不馬虎~35Please respect copyright.PENANAoTe6jZUjBA
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,35Please respect copyright.PENANA5yrBTUp7xl
就能達到這樣的成就~35Please respect copyright.PENANAEHFY0U19D5
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,35Please respect copyright.PENANAh0YAlIF5up
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。35Please respect copyright.PENANAE5dj8Jcfhe
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,35Please respect copyright.PENANAg6opbxzpOk
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~35Please respect copyright.PENANAdF3QhknF9T(除非你作弊使用神獸)35Please respect copyright.PENANAqksVSgm3eD
即便龍系也有弱點,35Please respect copyright.PENANAcdB3NQEoy1
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、35Please respect copyright.PENANA0JCMdgJv5d
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,35Please respect copyright.PENANADP29AGn1LF
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、35Please respect copyright.PENANAE7OtlMTafw
紫竽又指責他、35Please respect copyright.PENANAHOGiFwLWKn
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,35Please respect copyright.PENANA2x1TYzzuCN
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~35Please respect copyright.PENANATxf1eAReHp
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,35Please respect copyright.PENANAV3Y19hR7Io
這句其實是這首詩的重點,35Please respect copyright.PENANAtnnioGvBls
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~35Please respect copyright.PENANAgt9UytmBsM
意思是希望他不要計較特別,35Please respect copyright.PENANAFepVTfGfHg
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,35Please respect copyright.PENANARxJqQlf9pH
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」35Please respect copyright.PENANA0Xqjo7F3tK
我們常常會著重在Special上面,35Please respect copyright.PENANAmO2ckTKnRg
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...35Please respect copyright.PENANAhb8P4jisuc
這些都是各種意義上的Special,35Please respect copyright.PENANAGzKcUJg2TF
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,35Please respect copyright.PENANAzNxJpsYLVS
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,35Please respect copyright.PENANAkzPnjMyixK
甚至舉步維艱...35Please respect copyright.PENANAE9AgVNXIyt
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,35Please respect copyright.PENANAfkeH0L09aM
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,35Please respect copyright.PENANAP4tG19sb44
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,35Please respect copyright.PENANAlPOq8oMfNd
甚至我認為複製人,35Please respect copyright.PENANA1Inli6f1V2
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?35Please respect copyright.PENANA7RXLkU2gcF
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,35Please respect copyright.PENANAr2dKxQGb9a
這是為什麼呢?35Please respect copyright.PENANAcWlqTm1YZW
還有留級三年看似無所謂,35Please respect copyright.PENANAD1o0yzK5zu
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,35Please respect copyright.PENANA3xdNquy4ny
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~35Please respect copyright.PENANADmKmVDGMqJ
除了獻給學長這首詩,35Please respect copyright.PENANAniZlbMjRj9
也希望自己能做到~35Please respect copyright.PENANAK4S4fg4vNm
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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