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心情小語
ISSUE #4
Author: 季語
心情小語
Author: 季語
ISSUE #4
改編【拜訪春天】
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那年我們來到小小的山巔

有雨細濃濃的山巔。

你飛散髮成春天

我們就走進，意象深深的詩篇。

你說我像詩意的雨點，輕輕飄上你的紅靨，阿，我醉了好幾遍。

今年我又來到你門前

你只是用溫柔烏黑的眼，輕輕地說聲抱歉，這一個時節沒有春天

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改編

那時我望向你晶瑩剔透的眼

帶著點流連的雙眼

你飛散笑容香甜

我就慢慢的，因你的美而淪陷

你說我像星空伴著月，啊，我忘返一整夜

今天我又看向你的顏

你只是用毫無波瀾的臉，悄悄的說聲再見，夢境已不再相連

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心情小語
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Last updated: Apr 4, 2025
Total word count: 492
Total reading time: 2 Minutes
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