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流泠討論區～
ENTRY #1
Author: 餃餃餃ᴳᴺᴺ
Published:
Mar 16, 2025
流泠討論區～
Published:
Mar 16, 2025
ENTRY #1
（成神之路：冥冥之中）我的一點點超不專業書評
Author: 餃餃餃ᴳᴺᴺ
Published:
Mar 16, 2025
1 Min Read
292 Words
No Plagiarism!LNErtMGxvFpOZq5Ehe9Eposted on PＥNAＮＡ

作者很厲害欸，寫了三篇長篇小說 超強

我也是學生但還沒大學～然後我很閒 可以找我聊天（？）也可以來看看我的文！！184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhP0frUenWe

以下是完全不專業的書評，都是個人意見而已看看就好～

剛開始看的前五分鐘，第一印象就是這本好像還滿搞笑的，員工是阿宅然後還喜歡貓娘，抽卡歪了的那部分挺有笑點（？）184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlkUqe98eXF

但我覺得剛開頭寫這個有點突然，一開始看起來是以旅館員工為主要視角，但後來又開始從可雲的角度來敘述，但其實，簡介裡主要寫的是墨迎加入傭兵團的故事，看到第二章還是有種不知道誰是主角的感覺……也有可能是我自己的問題啦w184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy6cGk1sHo7

ㄜ對了，作者對有錢人的怨念好像真的很深吼。。。

故事背景像奇幻故事，但裡面有打電動、手機、貓控（？）這些元素或情節，看了有點出戲XDD184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡklTHOZMSWl

目前作者更新到第六章，都看完了，祝作者更文順利！！加油OwO184Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLttSLVtQB6

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