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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】
ENTRY #67
Author: 凜羽
Published:
Mar 26, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】
Published:
Mar 26, 2025
ENTRY #67
出題者：自殺前的一次旅遊
Author: 凜羽
Published:
Mar 26, 2025
1 Min Read
142 Words
No Plagiarism!Db9KxlocIJLMAYjFCvqzposted on PＥNAＮＡ

出題者：凜羽

作品連結：https://www.penana.com/story/167726/%E8%87%AA%E6%AE%BA%E5%89%8D%E7%9A%84%E4%B8%80%E6%AC%A1%E6%97%85%E9%81%8A

這是鴨鴨第一部作品，想看看大家有甚麼心得，以及能改善的地方。

這部作品主要是走平淡溫馨路線，但裏面有些許奇幻和血腥情節，不過沒有甚麼轉捩點，可能會讓大家覺得沉悶，儘管如此鴨鴨還是想嘗試這個創挑，希望接下來能越寫越好，謝謝大家

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