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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
ENTRY #69
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
Mar 27, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
Published:
Mar 27, 2025
ENTRY #69
鑑賞家：戀X友人
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
Mar 27, 2025
1 Min Read
219 Words
No Plagiarism!wm1HyTh2dThbNLEfHmkqposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我推的書！！！！！！

作者：靈波薇可548Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq58WtZ0o58

連結：戀X有人

心得（微據透）：

這本真的是太棒了，開頭男主角就被劈腿，劇情十分引人入勝。

失落的男主角遇到御姐班長，班長叫他不。要。分。手。這樣才能折磨劈腿的綠茶。

我們的男主角只猶豫一下，立刻贊成班長的請求，十分果決、太有男子氣概了！

然後男主X班長VS後面腦袋會會變奇怪的綠茶精，展開對決。

嘶（舔嘴唇）……整本我都看完了，精彩的劇情令人想不斷地看下去。

章節的附圖有香香的女生，強烈推薦！！！

評語：

這本有黑暗校園小遊戲感，以對話推進劇情為主。

然後標點符號部分有時出現的“”要改成「」，然後刪節號是……不是…

548Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS8PYIw4N7Y

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