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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
ENTRY #90
Author: 黑心小兔
Published:
Apr 17, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
Published:
Apr 17, 2025
ENTRY #90
出題者:修仙講不講道理
Author: 黑心小兔
Published:
Apr 17, 2025
1 Min Read
215 Words
No Plagiarism!wH4PCF0nAy5qxOMkTz2sposted on PＥNAＮＡ

出題者:黑心小兔452Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCWTlhB5JtE

標題:修仙講不講道理452Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr1rLQaZZNO

連結:https://www.penana.com/story/176859

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HI大家，這是一個關於工程師穿越踏上修仙路的故事。452Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK0CTJYH0fC

這是我的第三個故事，前兩個故事都是輕鬆甜文，聚焦在兩個人之間

第三篇文，嘗試了不一樣的挑戰，

是個有完整世界觀，繁多設定的成長故事。

1.想知道大家讀來，會不會覺得能自然而然了解世界，452Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTJaWULsEvu

而不是被砸一堆設定

2.出場的角色眾多，對我來說也不同於以往，

想知道大家對哪些角色印象深刻，他們是否性格鮮明，

又有沒有讓人喜歡的角色呢。

3.會不會想繼續讀下去，如果不會的話，是因為什麼呢？

謝謝大家。

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