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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
ENTRY #55
Author: 無眠人
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
ENTRY #55
【出題者】犬王子
Author: 無眠人
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
1 Min Read
78 Words
No Plagiarism!B4GhYGeeL5diZTvCpwoqposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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https://www.penana.com/story/173999/%E7%8A%AC%E7%8E%8B%E5%AD%90

關於這部作品我有幾個比較在意的點：

一、前幾章都聚焦在主角威廉的改造與馴化部分，不知道會不會讓讀者感到無趣，或勸退。

535Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBhVlrqivBu

拜託鑑賞家的指教了。

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