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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
ENTRY #105
Author: 小春
Published:
May 4, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
Published:
May 4, 2025
ENTRY #105
出題者。短篇作品：通道
Author: 小春
Published:
May 4, 2025
1 Min Read
112 Words
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出題者：小春

標題：通道

內容：主角遭遇地震後，進入了某個通道，並遇到怪物。

連結：https://www.penana.com/article/1725390

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其實這篇作品本來要寫到六千或八千字才對，但我後來想想，寫那麼多跟沒寫差不多，所以就把幾個解釋用事件全砍了。

期望：有沒有哪些地方解釋太少，無法靠想像力合理化的部分？

202Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRFqME3LF1Y

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